Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Pillow book

Things that make me sad

a yellow bird who dies running into a car and gets stuck in the grill

lost love becoming found love becoming lost love

a dead rat by the side of the road

Hateful words between lovers

chocolate that is too sweet with strawberries.

1 comment:

Lauren I. Ruiz said...

I like this poem. I like how it mentions death, love, and then chocolate. It's anticlimactic and thus humorous and it works!

However, in "stuck the in grill," "in" and "the" should be transposed, I imagine.